Well, we're starting over here, so I figured I could just as well show a link to a story I've been working on. It's quite long, currently at 36 chapters, so be warned! (Then again, that's to be expected - I believe that I've been working on the story for about 6 years now.)
Because it's 36 chapters and getting longer, I won't post all of it here. Instead, I'll just link you to the first chapter on my DeviantArt and let you go on from there. Any critiques or helpful notes are appreciated!
http://speedlinethehedgefox.deviantart.com/art/The-Corruptors-Chapter-00-01-97733511 Enjoy your reading!